Any ideas?

It wraps around the back too. Also, if you leave a "don't submit" could you tell me why?

My suggestion is to create a concept around an angry octopus, not just put an angry octopus on a shirt.

Okay, I'll try to think of a concept.

needs more background stuff

what's that sound? oh i know what it is...



bumpage!

I agree with what's been said. I think it's got the potential to be a really cool Tee!



PS. Please return the crit.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/18325/My_Hero

ok well i'll get working on this today then.

I really like this one the way it is. The design is clean and bold, I'm not too sure if adding a background wouldn't make it a bit too cluttered. Anyway, will be interesting to see what you do.

I'm thinking of adding a little submarine in there. Not sure how to incorporate it though...

maybe add some bubbles

Yup, will add bubbles too. New version coming soon ;)

I think I'm getting there. Comments and suggestions appreciated :)

I added some bubbles to the submarine propeller too. Comments? Suggestions?

I'm bumping this to get ahead of the penises.

that octopus means business

I would change the look of the sub propeller bubbles to match the ones of the octopus, stylewise.

It wouldn't convey the right kind of motion though... as-is, its creating frothy churned up bubbles, whereas the octopus is emitting air bubbles. I think I will revise the octopus' bubbles though.

Haha, Awesome!

bump

I don't like the bubbles. I think they should match the overall style of the octopus/sub.

bump before bed.

and one more bump. Come on guys and gals! I need some feedback!

What if one of the tenticles on the right side of the shirt reached all the way back around the shirt rolled up in a big fist ready to pound the sub or just about to wrap itself around the sub. Either way i think you need to lose the holes in his tenticles. i know it was a deign thing, but it's not working and if you want to take my advice about the tenticle going around the shirt, you will have to lose the holes anyway. My 2¢

I mean the left side of the shirt, coming from behiind the sub. It would add that I see the front now I see the back and get the twist kind of effect.

I agree with cvanidee. I think the whole design should have the same style. Critique mine too http://www.threadless.com/critique/18838/Diet

I really like this. I think you could experiment with more interaction between the octopus and the submarine, as others have suggested.

yeah, oops, I accidentaly put the tentacles on the wrong side on the back. Should be coming out the other side to be attached to the octopus. I'll give those suggestions a try; I really like the idea of having the octopus about to attack the sub.

one more bump before commencement of revision

Wow, I love this, but also think you could wrap the octopus around to the other side.



If you wouldn't mind, I'd appreciate a critique too.

ya one of the tentacles should wrap around the sub marine and also make the bubbles match..



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I like this a lot, just, the bubbles would be cooler as vector, but that's me personally. I like it a lot though, it's a very nice idea and I'm a fan of the Japanese expxression marks. :)

Changed the bubbles to suit the style of the octopus more.

Detail shot of octopus

Detail shot of submarine

i love the suckers at the end of the tentacles. They charm me for some reason, angry octopus or not.

I like this....I might change the placement of the submarine tho....looks like it should be down a little more....

Thanks, anyone else?

i like it too, but I agree wit scarlet. Not quite sure what the black symbol on his head is...

It's a japanese angry expression mark. haven't you ever watched pokemon?! :P

Bump.

i think those angry marks are normally more hand drawn and less symetrical aren't they? and what are the rings at the end of his tentacles for?

i'd buy it

Love both the sub and the octopus, agree that it should go lower on the shirt...

The rings on the end of his tentacles are the suckers. I see what you're saying about the lower placement as well.

I think some eyebrows might be in order. The usually make or break a facial expression in japanimation!



Very awesome design though!