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buko on Apr 29 '08 thanks for your comments i made some changes with text i hope you like it
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ladrones on Apr 29 '08 LOOKS GOOD
but does not read well maybe other text im not really digging the word skatetronaut i think it may hurt your score, because people who like the shirt wont like the word possibly. if your going to keep text, i think you should have text that is more revlevent but htast just me |
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yea i agree with ladrones
i like the design but just change the font |
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I'd lose the text and have the astronaut skating down off the shoulder... maybe make it a little bigger too.
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What he said.
This is good and fun, but the text spoils it. |
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i agree about the font, but i like the word skateronaut. can you incorporate it into the design a little more seamlessly?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/30760/pigeonatomy |
24 days later
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I actually like the font and the placement of it on the shirt.
Skate-tron-aut. Sounds pretty cool. Looks good. |
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awesome!!
comment on mine please :] i would love to have your input you seem like a great artist. |
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I don't think it needs the text cos it doesn't really add to the meaning of the image. Otherwise great image... random concepts - woot :)
crit mine! Cubistest bot Thanks! |
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Just ditch the text.
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537 days later
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Maybe do try without the texts?? Let's see the how worked =)
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wow!
I'm workin' on something similar: http://www.threadless.com/critique/69732/star_rider but also on that: http://www.threadless.com/critique/69733/how_does_it_work http://www.threadless.com/critique/69734/ready_to_fight |
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awesome design.
aha im allabout the astronauts lol checkout my first design as far as ur design ide add some more swirls and loose or change the text looks extremely out of place. maybe if you could make the letters out of those swirls ur doin under the astro. great work so far keep it up! and i just updated my design! Critique mine if you have the time WOULD BE AWESOME |
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great illustration and colors! i like rkotar's idea of making the word out of the swirls
my design is up for scoring. could ya help me out and vote and leave a comment? thanks! happy worst day ever |
182 days later
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superb i love the shades you used in it i think you should submit it
If you have time do suggest on my work Brake Heart |
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I think you should stick with the word skatetronaut, but maybe have it as a whole word, on one line, as it took me quite a while to work out what it said. You could also try incorporating it into the design more, as someone suggested above. The concept, and the design, is great though!
If you have a second, I have a design currently being scored... if you wouldn't mind voting / commenting on it, that'd be much appreciated, thanks! :) http://www.threadless.com/submission/313543/Tricksters |
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Awesome drawing, but drop the text...
Dark side of the moon and Desperate Houses are up for scoring for the last day! I appreciate if you score or comment on it! |
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Hi Buko. Your designs are works of art. Definitely some of the most beautiful on here. As I beginner I would love to know a little about your processes. This one looks done in Illustrator but I look at some of your others like Mr T(iger) and think OMG how did he get the distressed/vintage look, and do you stick to 8 colours or request the special print technique?
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critique welcomed