Ever felt like you were stuck? Haha...



Help me out with the colours. Do they look good?



How about the placement?



I LOVE YOU FOR HELPING OUT.

wow, that's fantastic. i think the placement is fine like that, but are you sure you want it on a bright blue shirt? something not so loud would be better, it steals the spotlight away from your beautiful drawing.



critique?:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/43553/fish_bait

The drawing looks great. I think a different shirt color would do it more justice. Maybe yellow, cream, black or navy?

Here are 4 more shirt colours.

I like the designes but I dont like the forme generale. Maybe try changer forme de blob.





please crit me

nice ... like it on white & black ... may be change the placement ...

plz critique mine ...

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oo now thats nice. i love the random animals. heh. but the blob shape seems weird, like what are they stuck in? perhaps if they were crammed into a box or something?



also looks better on white imo :)

i like black and white t-shirt, yup u can try to break the shape, the illustration in the shape is very nice i like it

Nice ! You try make it small and maybe sprit two become human body o'gen part?

Please don't link your Crit from people's designs. I think this is a bit boxed in. Don't use that black line to separate the shape from the rest of the shirt, just use the shapes of the characters. maybe have them amke up a more interesting shape overall than that blob.

I like the black line as well as the shape. It's very unique! Submit it!

Don't spam your links on other people's subs up for voting.

againstbound, I'm sorry. Won't do that again.

I like the tessellation thing... very esher-esk... maybe the design is a little bit overwhelming being so large... perhaps you could make it a little smaller to calm it down a bit.



Is it ok to ask for look at my critique for some comments? Is it just a nono to ask for linking from a submission?





My Critique

i dont like the shape.

Its a great design but yeah Im not real crazy about the teardrop shape. What about not closing the picture in with a border and have the animals/objects fill up the shirt front naturally. Good luck!

Please tame a look at mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/41440/motorcone