Fake place made of cardboards and threads.



Please, give me your opinion.



Anything wrong? Number of colors...

Changes? Do better the tree, the grass, the birds...

Posible versions:

-Little sand bags in the back side hold the objects with threads.

- "Fake" poster instead of the right bird.



Thanks

I don't know if it's just my computer, but I can't see your image.



Please help me out if you have the time!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/219225/Green_Eyes

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48010/Cowpie

http://www.threadless.com/critique/45210/Mushroom_Cut

Try to Refresh. I can see the image without problems.

This is really cool! I love the style and the idea. Espesh the lightbulb sun :D the birds, i only realised they were birds when i read your comment! maybe you could make it more obvious.. otherwise its an awesome idea! i really like it!



http://threadless.com/critique/48478/I_Play_The_Cool_Instrument

Hey 0es3



Nice design...looks really groovy! I also didn't realise that it was birdies hanging from the sky. My suggestion would be to make the wires a little bit thinner, especially the birds so it will be more noticable.



Maybe I can borrow your fake clouds for my Moon design:-)

Hanging with the Moon



Woudl love to hear your comments



Thanks a bunch!

Ok, thanks both for your advises. I'm working in a new version with wires thinner and new birds.

Is the sun ok?? Maybe I have to draw some sunrays. What do you think?



Thanks

This is the second version.

I have made the birds bigger and the wires thinner.

I've moved some objects and deleted the hill.



I wait your advises. Thanks!

Real cool work. Submit this!



Please check my design: http://www.threadless.com/critique/48570/City_Dream

Haha v clever!



The wires look much better thinner, although some still seem to be varying sizes/colors which is a little distracting. Good idea keeping the light bulb one thicker.



I'm wondering how it would look with shadows behind them to emphasize that they are hanging(?) It might make it look too busy but it might be worth a try.



Stick it on a real tee photo too for that added oomph! :)

cool idea. the only suggestion i have would be to make one string holding the grass longer than the other, just to break up the strong horizontals....just a thought!



please help with mine night vision

I think its neat idea, but to be honest I really don't see a strong enough concept to be print worthy. If you are really going to push this idea. A suggestion is to give something a little more noticeable the break in the line, like the grass.

Hahahaha... I like this design. It reminds me of a song called survive by rise against. It's about how life is not perfect and w lot of it is fake. I love how you did the bird hanging from the broken string. Only suggestion I have is on the sun. I think you should put the pull chain on the inside of the sun hanging off the side of the light, not directly underneath. Awesome design!



Can you critique a few of mine?

Wild Fire

Muffin Band

Fire Extinguisher

Thanks?

I mean... thanks. Not thanks with a question mark.

Thanks for your advises.

The next version, today or tomorrow.



Thanks again.

Cool idea. I think it would be worth adding grey to your colour palette and using it to colour your wires.



If haven't already done so, I'd appreciate it if you could score my designs:

Never mind the tigers and

Pre-loved Kitties

Hey



Liking the wires on this one! I think the thickness of these would vary for more authentity (grass piece would be heavier than the birds).



Maybe you can make the grass piece not straight on the bottom and make it bubble out slightly? It will expand this area and also won't look too straight either, which looks a little funny on the t-shirt placement (not in a negative way of course, just looks like it could be expanded).



If you have the time, would love to hear your comments on my designs:



Hanging with the Moon

Take Your Pick



Thanks!

idea is nice. but not finished.why this fake world is goin' down on wires?

maybe it should cover real ruined world?

or maybe you need some person sitting on the bench in the front?

grass I thing need to be a bit angled to the ground :)

clouds and sun holding wires doesn't have holes where to bind

keep workin' :)

Ok!! Again, thanks to everybody for your advises.

Arrrrrgg Design: About the wires, I don't know if it's better different sizes in the wires or not, because some objects are heavier than others. I'll try both and I'll decide.

About the shadows, I like your idea, I'll try too.

And thank you so much for the tee template.



A wild Thing: I like your idea. I'll do it for the next version.



Girafixx: About the sun, you are right there is no sense that the pull chain is underneath.



Tigerbill: The wires in gray perfect idea.



OrangeSensation1: My clouds are very easy. I'll try to find the tutorial to make them and I'll send you the link. About the grass, I like your idea. In the next version you can see it.



Brighwood: I do'nt know a lot about halftones but I'm learning, I think your point can be great.



Smelynai: I'll put holes to the clouds. About the real ruined world and the person I'll see how they look in the design.



Thanks again everybody

I like the clouds a lot! I totally agree with having less symmetry with the grass hanging crooked and different sizes of string. It's just a thought, but when you tie a string to something, you sometimes make a bow (well, 3/4 of a bow because the one tail is the hanging string). It might look neat and add to the look you're going for. Just a thought tho :)



Thanks for critiquing mine! It (and another one) are up for voting. Please help me out if you have the time!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/220900/Mushroom_Cut

http://www.threadless.com/submission/220340/Bikini_Love

gr8 idea, just a suggestion, maybe add depth to the tree and the ground like u did for the cloud. keep up the gud work.



plz comment on mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48828/colourful_bliss

thx