needs more eyeliner

He's so emo, he quite using it. It just ran all the time. ;)

The monster is cute, the speech bubble is nice. But this isnt something I would buy/wear.



And although i like both the bubble and the monster dont quite match. Use both elements again in 2 different designs.



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love the title

ok, this is the first design i have ever critiqued where i haven't selected "um ... err ... don't submit!". i really like the monster, but the text bubble seems just .. slightly .. out of place, therefore i chose "cool, but it needs work". it does, admitdly, need work, but this is an excellent foundation!

the monster is so so. the speech bubble is bad. imagery in speech bubbles is better i believe. make your monster a bit more a elaborate and your speech bubble a lot more vivid. if anything, change that awful font. perhaps a heart instead of the

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i don't agree ... i feel the monster is refinded enough, and the simplistic nature of it is what makes it so adorable

Thanks for all the comments! Very helpful!

What if he just was saying a heart? Like a drawn one, not text.

I still like the idea of a question, could I do a heart and a question mark?

I wanted to keep the monster simple.

It was actually inspired by a light fixture. (I'm working in lighting design right now) The fixture mounts in the ceiling and has little "arms" to hold it in the drywall. The mouth is where the power converters mount, and the eyes are screws. I kept looking at it and seeing a cute monster, so I made this. =)

really like the monster....I would use only 'lets b friends' fot text...nice tee though...I would wear it..

I like the monster simple but cool, i think...I would change the font and the bubble tho.

its a very cute design, but the two elements dont fit together... I'd try and get it to be one cohesive design. I love the monster though, maybe make the bubble more like him?

The design needs to use the space better, and the monster needs some refinement (feet or some other prop).

feet are over rated. lol But yeah I think I'm gonna work on making the monster and the word bubble more alike. But what should he be saying?