Hey people, do you like this idea? It's not cleaned-up or colorized yet, but I thought I'd get some feedback first. Looking for name ideas too. Thanks!

So cleaned this up and think I'm going to sub it now, but wanted to offer a final chance for feedback—and I'm still looking for a cooler title idea if there's one out there.

Pretty! Tho I'd like to see some darker color, just a bit of shadow at the trees, maybe. I'm giving you "needs work", but you could sub it like this, it's nice.

Wow, this is nice, the sketchy look feels right. I really can´t think of any suggestions, It is ready for submission

That's ridiculously good! I love it so much, it's just amazing and looks wonderful! I would totally buy it!



-Please stop by sometime and critque my latest work-

Maybe reduce the size on the shirt, but that's it.



Cat's Nightmare, V2 needs comments and critique votes

this looks awesome! i love the style and the line quality! this is definitely threadless material! submit!



i've got one too:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/54637/Royal_Flying_Machine

I freakin' love this. Such a great concept, illustration, and execution.



I would probably buy it. Sub.



Did you create that flash swf from scratch or was it a template? If it was a template, mind giving me a link? I don't like using the generic one very much.



Best of luck with this! Let me know when it's up for voting.



Help me?

Hagnii, it was a while ago now, but I believe I re-skinned/modified the Threadless flash presentation template thing.



Thanks for your comments.

I'd advise placing it slightly higher so the birds are heading more towards the shoulder of the tee, but other than that you're ready to sub. This is super cool.



Critique one of mine ifyou have a chance?

Poco, Tito & Lucci

Expecting something?

Pretty Baby

excelent artwork, looks ready to sub to me.



help a guy out?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/56308/Socks_and_clocks#v2

Wow. Great!

Really like this, I'd say sub it. Possible alternative title- 'Migration'?

Yeah, was thinking "Migrant Forest" for the title when I sub it.

Hey, just subbed this under the title, "Migrant Forest". Thanks for the words people!

Oh, here's the link: Migrant Forest