Not sure how I feel about this...rnColor or no color?

I think the colour changes the emphasis from the heads to the bodies (they compete as to what the viewer is looking at). I like the beige sketch. Would it be weird for the two frames to touch or for their heads to come out of their frames to kiss? Also I think maybe rework the legs on the boy to make the back leg a bit more behind the front - somehow the angle isn't working for me. Does that make sense?

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Not sure how having their heads come out would work, but I can try. I like the idea.

I'm digging this. Definitely prefer the black and white over the color.

im a fan of the black and white

Absolutely keep the black and white it gives it a marvelous feel. As some one said the boys feet need to be worked on a bit.
Also you cross-hatched the boy in places but nothing else, i would like to see it with that pushed a bit more.

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Thanks guys. I'll be working on the feet. The leg isn't crosshatched, though. It just looks that way because it's on a small scale.

maybe some vintage background can enhance the art?

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