something funny: I loved the shape of the cloud, the rain, the placement, the colors, everything. And I was amazed how just a simple illustration of rain could look so good. Simple and brilliant, I thought.
And then I saw the words. Oh, that's the idea. But you know what, I wouldn't wear a shirt that says Love Peace Hope Life on it.
Even though it's the main ingredient, I think the shirt would be a $5 without the words.
Thanks everyone for the input, I'm going to do a big mash of all of everyone's together for the second version and I'll see if I can't get something everyone can love! Keep the suggestions coming please :)
purple rain, purple rain... has to be the color! and i like there are words, and i really like that you don't see them at first. but i'm gonna have to say i think the words are too cheesy. also, maybe try a smooth on the bottom, fluffy on the top cloud (like a real one).
the words are actually very clear if you go more than a few feet away from your computer screen ie how nearly everyone in the world will look at your shirt. My only complaint is that the cloud looks like the rain has a bad toupee. Other than that, solid idea. 3.
I used to really like Prince. Then his first wife gave birth to that alien baby and he went nuts.
He was so much cooler before he went nuts.
Kids, if you're going to be a rock star, marry a woman who won't give birth to an alien baby. She'll only make you nuts and cause you to alienate your fans.
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