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Mar 20 '07
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$5 first comment!
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uh oh the link doesn't work. The larger version is here: ZOOM
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I'd love it even more on a different color shirt. I want the contents of the bubbles to stand out more. I really like the concept.
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I don't love it.
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you're just mad she schooled you on boobs. :-P
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I'm very open on other colors of shirts, I meant to do some more options but wanted to meet the deadline.
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Oh, I didn't put swatches, but it's black white and grey on dark grey in this version.
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shades of black...
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Shamelessly bumping for more comments, criticism and questions.
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wullagaru on Mar 20 '07 id say esther has it right either a new shirt color or lighten/brighten the bubbles but right now they lack contrast against the shirt
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Grey is not a good color for this shirt, I would go with something lighter, like sky blue or baby pink if you want to keep the print black. Might want to try making the satellite images larger. More easily recognizable from a distance. They appear too small right now. I would ditch the 4th symbol on the left hand column as I have no idea what it is. I might replace it with a symbol for mathematics, like a compass on a trapezoid, protractor or something. It's a good though, and I apologize if I'm being overly brutal. It's a good idea, and once tweaked a bit.. I see the potential for $5. Good luck!
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No worries tired angel I appreciate the feedback. The fourth image on the left is a closeup of the eye patterning which is overlapping musical notes and mathematical equations and other such imagery. I'll try to get a link up on Friday or Saturday with other color options. Busy class day tomorrow.
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I Love it... except for the star in the eye. That's the only thing that would stop me from wearing it. But awesome idea!
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Eck... I'm being an overblogger on my own design...
Anyway, the star in the pentagon is a Pythagorean symbol with reference to the golden ratio. For more information I recommend "Donald Duck in Mathmagic Land," possibly the finest thing ever to come out of Disney that wasn't a ripoff of a pre-existing story. |
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it's REALLY hard to see, otherwise I like it. I would wear it on a color I could actually SEE it.
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Yay for eyeball designs ! :P
the symbol in the eye will probably been seen as a Satanic pentagram rather than the Pythagorean symbol referencing the golden ratio I guess there's not much you can do about that |
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Thanks for that Grypesagon!