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Jun 20 '07
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epocalypse

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by epocalypse
design of a rusted angel. it kind of got knocked slash ignored in the critique. but i want to sub it so here it is
Samtricks
Samtricks on Jun 20 '07
im amazed by the drawing, but there are too much similitude, just concentrate on 1 girl and improve your design around her :)
Simon Cowell
Simon Cowell on Jun 20 '07
You drew it once, flipped it, and placed it on the shirt again, why?

It looks too sketchy, sometimes that works, but in this case it is not. Also, it has too much of an anime vibe going on.
jasper7777
jasper7777 on Jun 20 '07
If you reworked it-- someone who likes anime might wear it.

it needs a lot more refinement-- are those wings?
Christoph Jenkins
Christoph Jenkins on Jun 20 '07
looks pretty darn awful... but newer, well thought out work in your style could really be great!
epocalypse
epocalypse on Jun 21 '07
wow, i feel the hatred. well. so much for the opinions i got on other websites. yes indeed though, this need rethought and redesigned as a shirt, actually, it might just not work as a shirt for most people and therefore probably would not sell. i still like it though.
Ashelia
Ashelia on Jun 21 '07
Reminds me of Rinoa from Final Fantasy VIII. Not bad.
gyrfalcon
gyrfalcon on Jun 21 '07
I think the girl is very attractive, and it really is almost there. Get rid of the mirror effect and tighten it up some more, and I'd buy it. I hope you resubmit!
epocalypse
epocalypse on Jun 21 '07
i may indeed. danke ^_^
leucous
leucous on Jun 21 '07
ya can you accent the clevage any more?
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jayrawz
   jayrawz on May 14 '08
maybe u could make one girl a simple line drawing.. that would make it more interesting.. but its a good idea tho..



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