Vital Creation Error
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1801 days ago
Proposé le :
Jun 20 '07
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49 comments
Note moyenne :
1.90 from 2,306 votes
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Maybe draw some stars near his head.
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Is the error that he can't get up? Might want to make that a little clearer somehow
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No RAW. Meat should be fully cooked before consumption.
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So he died from slipping on a banana? I think he might have just got a bruise. I don't know many people that die from falling. The concept is lacking.
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perhaps he died because due to his short arms he can't roll over and get himself back up? hmmm, a bit confusing.
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Also, the fact that his eyes are open make it seem as though he's alive - perhaps x's instead?
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thats great but perhaps some movement lines to show him slipping
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who ever said he was dead?
i picture him just laying there... "ah Sh*t not again" |
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I think it's supposed to be like a turtle, like, " I've fallen and I can't get up".
It's the Awkward Age! |
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perhaps you should include some lines to indicate that the tyrannasaurous cannot roll over
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I was going to title it "I've fallen and can't get up" but my friend who gave me the idea insisted on the one up there. I'm to nice...
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I was given the impression that he fell and couldnt get up because of how big he was and lack of arms to help him. Whether he's dead or not I realy like this shirt.
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I love it.
I just wish you could make the point more clear. I understand what you're trying to get across, but it would come off better if you fixed it up a bit. |
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hah cute
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I really like the idea, but it needs more detail, right now it's too simple.
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hahaha, awesome. with some work, i would Definitely buy this, but for the time being, i agree with moocow: more detail!
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i think the concept is just that the dinosaur slipped on a banana and fell. cute idea but better execution seeing how so many people are confused.
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Sub to critiques first next time. You need something that indicates he can't get up.
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kaloyster on Jun 21 '07 It's funny that you deleted your Critique blog about the CAUTION: THIS IS SPARTA design you ripped off, trelixus.
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sweet fivebuy ;)
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"I have a big head and little arms" .. hehe, I love it.
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i like it, and i agree with jet1125, stars would be nice.
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i like it but did it fall or is it dead. i still love it though.
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$5, I love this.
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i think his foots backwads O___O but i like the concept even if others dont. go dino go !!
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hahaha, made me laugh out loud when i saw it! yes!
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and the foots not backwards.
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Sorry dude, this is a no from me. The concept is lackin dawg, and the execution needs a lot of work. Maybe next year man.
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I like the concept, but whats with the brown puddle? Did he mess himself after he fell? I don't think it needs the puddle...just the banana and the dino.
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I like the idea allot but it does need lines to suggest that it's trying to get back up, maybe even curve the body. I would buy it if it was improved a little.
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T-Rexes had those itty bitty arms. its hilarious. 5$
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I understood the humor right away but I don't know what I understood and why I understood it if that makes sense. It has something to do with tiny arms... I think. I am giving you a 3 though because it could use some maintenance. Still nice though.
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Yeah Im not entirely sure why this was so confusing. Not everything has to be spelled out to be successful and considering how many designs imply an idea, I dont get why this one messed so many people up. The art might need some touching up, but the idea is pretty funny.
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I totally agree with jet. Make it look more like he just fell.
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Bahaha, I laughed out loud at this... I love it. Not too sure about the green, though.
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Hahaha that's a great idea! That said, please print on a different colour - how bout a navy blue??
The look on the TRex really makes it work. :) |
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Oh yeah.... $5!
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Maybe a caveman salesman selling Life Alert?
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the shirt colors are a bit nausiating but other than that i like it
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What's there to discuss? He slipped on a banana peel, he fell, and his arms aren't large enough to help him get back up.
5$, easily! |
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I really think this design would be much more effective if the image was placed lower on the shirt...but it still made me giggle! I got the idea right away!
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he slipped over and cant get up. like a turtle on the back of his shell. pointing out the "vital creation error" that once hes over he cant get back up.
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isn't this one of the ways Homer altered the future on that Simpson's halloween episode?
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I like it except the ground or whatever he's laying on looks like he peed himself or something.
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Yeah, it looks like some kind of dragon shirt a kid would wear in fifth grade or something.
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its cool but like many people said it would be a lot better if there were clear signs of him struggling to get up.
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rofl xD I laughed as soon as I saw it. Though Pink Antenna's comment about the pee made me laugh as well
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