They are two different compositions, starting from same graphic elements. Certain people prefer the first, others the second. I don't regard this version as being the best compared to the other, it's just a "different approach". Thanks for your coms.
I like both so much - I think the other is a tad better with placement in my personal opinion, though. But I like both colors. you should let customers choose which colors - black or skyblue
i... do... not... understand... the characters look cool, but what the hell are they doing? and why are they doing it? maybe i'm not cool enough to get it, but i'm tired of shirts that look vaguely japanese and are indecipherable.
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