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The Intruder

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Jul 23 '08
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Starrfold

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by Starrfold   
Five colors on olive, orange, or light blue. You see, the bag puppet with googley eyes wants the bird's eggs. This is why you don't trust things that come out of holes. Other bad things that come out of holes: Eels. Bullets. Underground dynamite blasts. Half-chewed taffy. Baby bears. Ants. Aunts. Fingers. Ant fingers.
Amez
Amez on Jul 23 '08
Hilarious!
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Jul 24 '08
Love the comment by you starrfold and like this very horizontal concept. I'd love it if the bag was dressed up with a bit more creation to it, like a make-shift happy bird which is drawn in such a half-assed way and completely unproportionate as to show the mindset of the person who has stuffed their hand into a bag trying to steal a bird's eggs.
mchera
mchera on Jul 24 '08
It looks like the bag is being punctured. you may want some space between the bag and the tree branch.

It might be helpful to bring the branch that the bird is on down closer to the main branch and nest. It seems like the bird does not even care about the eggs. Actually, it might be better to get rid of the upward branch all together and put the bird on the main branch. The only thing thing the upward branch is doing is making the branch more believeable and adding intersecting lines making more interesting. On second thought, make the upward branch a downward branch, move the bird to the main branch and leave some space between the bag and the main branch.
Cichan
Cichan on Jul 25 '08
more detail on the bag. and 4$ with green!
Bisparulz
   Bisparulz on Jul 25 '08
looks great on green 5$
AtomicBunnies
AtomicBunnies on Jul 27 '08
They go to the trouble of stuffing themselves inside a tree, then the best they have to offer is a paper bag with googly eyes. That, in my opinion, is fantastic.
AtomicBunnies
AtomicBunnies on Jul 27 '08
(and definitely green, it's like you're IN the forest)
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jschoey2
jschoey2 on Jul 29 '08
Its a nice quirky idea, and the illustration is nice but it looks like the bird is flying around with a giant branch.
lookmommyadork
lookmommyadork on Jul 29 '08
aw cute
soundcrafter
soundcrafter on Jul 29 '08
Green 5$'d.



Thanks for the comment you wrote about it. Makes me connect and makes me that much more likely to buy it if (read: WhEN) it gets printed.
Laser Bread
   Laser Bread on Jul 30 '08
yes! looks great
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