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Machine-Made Man

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Aug 22 '08
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by Alezunde   
On Olive Green, the white ink would glow-in-the-dark.
joannchilada
joannchilada on Aug 22 '08
I like the concept. Would it make more sense for the inner workings to show only when in the dark? Otherwise the glow thing doesn't make much sense other than being glowy for the sake of glowy. And maybe that's what you were going for, but it's confusing. Again, I like the concept.
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 22 '08
I agree with joann, make the innards of the man either UV or glow only, and make the whole thing bigger without the tape-y pieces around the face.
every3rdthought
every3rdthought on Aug 22 '08
Can't agree - I like the tape-y bits and the fact that the innards aren't only glow (otherwise you'd just have a failry plain picture) - only criticism is, I'm not that big on Ts with hearts on them. And why is the heart on the right side?
discuss
discuss on Aug 23 '08
Lose the stripes, maybe add some mechanical stuff to his head. If you're going to use glow ink, add more to the shirt so he looks normal in the light and the mechanical stuff only shows in the dark.



Nice illustration.
CuteTeezRule
CuteTeezRule on Aug 23 '08
I like the sand tee
pugotto
pugotto on Aug 23 '08
i agree...the bars are random. and I dont really understand why the face is making that expression.
DrMcHug
DrMcHug on Aug 23 '08
i would like it if it was built around the person wearing the shirt. Other skeleton shirts have all the parts were you would have them
Marcus Kendig
Marcus Kendig on Aug 24 '08
yeah would have been better without the bars.
hokorasu
hokorasu on Aug 24 '08
i think the bars are fine

gives it some action
InterstellaRocker
InterstellaRocker on Aug 24 '08
His Heart is on the wrong side!
Muckl
Muckl on Aug 24 '08
Great! Like it the way it is.
mchera
mchera on Aug 25 '08
I really like the image.
Alex Tree
Alex Tree on Aug 25 '08
one olive green, for sure
black_canary
black_canary on Aug 25 '08
I still like your design even though it is anatomically inaccurate!
Terrestrial_soup
Terrestrial_soup on Aug 26 '08
the heart is on the wrong side
ljsconzo
ljsconzo on Aug 26 '08
i like the olive/glow combo, with the bars, but the heart is really bothering me. great design though.
woda
woda on Aug 27 '08
i don't like the face or the bar across the eyes, but i absolutely LOVE the inner workings.
technojunkie83
technojunkie83 on Aug 28 '08
The Line is great, the art is really awesome, i love the design. And perhaps the face has something to do with a statement maybe not obvious to people right off the bat. I would buy and wear just as is. Its great.
brittah
brittah on Aug 28 '08
no bars and definatley do the glow in the dark.
Micah LaRae
Micah LaRae on Aug 29 '08
The heart is on the wrong side!
ninety
ninety on Aug 29 '08
I think it's great on sand! awesome illo!
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