The Noble Gases
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Sep 11 '08
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I like the style, and the banners are great.
thoughts on mine before i submit? http://www.threadless.com/critique/28213/Telephone_Booth |
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placement should be a bit higher
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mlurb on Sep 12 '08 yeah placement higher...did you run out of colours to highlight the bottom two? you could try reusing a shadow or highlight colour from the other ones...the bottom two just look flat in comparison at the moment...the shirt might look quite nice just as the top three...you might not wanna lose those extra characters though...dunno...just a thought
cheers for commenting mine |
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mlurb on Sep 12 '08 Any chance of critiqueing my other one? http://www.threadless.com/critique/28169/Acapella_Shhirt
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thanks for the comments =)
the whole style is flat but yeah all 8 colors are used |
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I really like this $5
Very unique with a great twist on the elements ;) |
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My only suggestion is that Xenon, chemically, is a complete badass.
He actually forms compunds. So I think you should make him a bit more of a pompous prince that only gets with the hot, nobility women, instead of a wimp. |
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$4, Xenon killed it
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thanks for the comment
I wasn't really going off what the actual gases were like, just that they were the noble gases |
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love it! good idea!
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thanks!
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NERD!
Also, it should be higher, as someone else suggested. And bigger! |
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Haha, I would wear this when I'm attending my Chemistry Class.
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hahahahaa, I'm taking chem. right now.
My teacher would LOVE this! |
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igo2cairo on Sep 13 '08 Sweet! Really funny concept and I love the style.
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Fantastic, we need more science tees! (Now that the LHC has not created any black holes) $
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Hahaaha! That's very funny! I like it a lot. :D
Thanks for critique on my T. I am so undecided..! |
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cool idea. maybe all in one line and a bit smaller. might look better on chest than tummy...
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thanks for the comments everyone :D
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excellent concept lol
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thanks :D
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hah, this is really funny. If anything I might also make the title "Noble Gases" in fancy-scrolly style like the names. But definitely about ready to submit
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this is awesome, I would def buy this :) 5 $$$$
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thanks! :D
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Very clever idea. As a master of the not-so-noble gases I salute you.
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thanks!
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I probably wouldn't buy this (I never took chem) but I know friends I'd totally recommend for (ie, my friend who is a chem major)
But the font is too childish for the concept. I agree about it needing fancier fonts. Then, I'd be buying this for my friend most definitely! :) |
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Thanks
I tried fancier fonts but it didn't look right since the rest was so cartoon |
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Haha, that's great!
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thanks :D
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Yer I like it. Does it have to stretch all the way across the tee? Try considering the placement.
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bennyd302 on Sep 14 '08 cool idea
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thanks
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I'm not a huge fan of the font. Handwriting in some sort of noble-looking scroll would make this shirt more successful.
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Needs moar Neon!
I know it's already been mentioned but I think placement and size could be improved. Cute concept though. |
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I first thought that they're birds.
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birds have beaks ;)
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Maybe without the "The Noble Gases" banner.
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Duke Argon totally looks like a lollipop kid from the Wizard of Oz. $5
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I think what I like most about this shirt is the thought put into the actual names - Duke Argon sounds like a completely legitimate name for a classic Duke. The humour is in the details. Seeing all of your submissions I understand why you suggested colour for "watercooler" ... not everyone can work with it as well as you.
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thanks guys
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It's very funny. It's very ugly as well.
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i think theyre cute ;P
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Winter the artist on Sep 16 '08 very cute idea!! I'd go for it more as a print
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you should probably move it up on the shirt a little.
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Not a fan of the placement, too large it seems. otherwise I would be tempted to buy it.
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thanks!
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Its a fun party for my eyes and brain!:)
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thanks :D
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nice~
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$5!
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haha...witty!
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thanks!
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nice one...;D
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chemistry rocks!
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nice concept for a shirt
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thanks!
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The Noble Gases!
King Neon
Queen Helium
Duke Argon
Princess Krypton
Prince Xenon