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hmmph...
i get the wood i get the paper but how does the last plane tie in with god? aluminum maybe... but god? |
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Wow, i really like the concept.
For me you can put some "aviation" poem in the red box, so you link the evolution with the love to flying. :) |
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i guess i dont like it because the last plane is like... 3 different planes put together. maybe if i didnt know that i would like it more.
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I like the idea but I don't like the text, especially the "in god we trust." and i dont really like the wooden plane.
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Also, I hate to be a 'remove-the-text-nazi' but I think the design is still clear enough to convey the idea of "plane evolution" without really saying it.
and the "in god we trust..." really kills it for me.
Overall, it's a neat idea, but I think it needs more work.