I love life? I’m sure you guys do to. Everybody has the right for a good and fair life. But unfortunately, this is not common for many people in this world. There is something that we can do about. We love life...we can help make other people love their life to.

I think it'd be a little hard to read all of those things. I think you should edit some out so you can make the font much larger.

I love the concept!

But hard to read ... make them bigger..?

hmm but I like the composition...

Well, nice work,~~

I agree with coxiesara, list fewer things so you can make them bigger and easier to read at a glance. You can still do an impressive list and get your point across without listing 70 things.

i think that theres so many things you cant read it is the point of the piece. I Heart a lot. and a lot is what makes up a life. i dont think it needs the bullets tho.



i wouldnt wear this but i thought i'd defend it.

"education" is listed twice.



some of the items sound odd when preceded with the "i heart". like "i heart holocaust victim tracing"??

i think itd look more organized under the i heart.

i agree that you could remove some of the items and still get the point across. it would allow for a bigger font and easier reading. also, since the title of the shirt is "i love life" i think it would be nice if the word "life" stood out a little bit, maybe bold and slightly bigger than the words around it? my last suggestion is to change the bullets, the open boxes make me want to put check marks in all of them.



i love the idea, i think it's great! nice job!

I wish "You" was on there too.

That way you could point to it

when you want that special

person to feel special.

Well, I've been over this shirt with a fine-toothed comb, and I don't see "TITS" no place, so no $.



However, it's a really cool design! Fiver!

Education can be on there twice but not love??? :-(

i got excited cos i thought it'd be something non-redcross.

Maybe you could put I <3...on the front, and the list on the back?

I love the idea but I don't want to stand still for 5 min. and let my slow reading friends read my shirt

bit preachy imo.

ugh.. poor poor Milton Glaser.

i love love?

no check-marks? 300 options? =[

ok...i love it. i don't know what these people are talking about? a bit preachy?? whatever! print it. i'll freakin buy it!!

i like the idea, but i think this makes for a very bad and boring t-shirt. in any case, moving the list underneath the "i <3" is a good idea.

The idea is that you guys buy this shirt and then personalize it by checking boxes. I can’t do it for you right. On the image it shows up rather small...but on a tee it is a readable 12pt+ font.



Sorry for putting some words in twice...wil change it if it's produced.



And Kiwiy: You are a ass. Thing behind your f***** box dude.

It's interactive dude....it's fun to marker your own tee shirt...don't think that straight man! whatever.... thanks for your professional oppinion... :|

I'm beginning to 'heart' plain Tees

I would be happy if I could read it.

I LOVE REDUCING CHILD MORTALITY

it s famous

*cynical

you go sinister man! here you go: 5 points (steek die maar in je zak)

I'd give it a 5. But I'ld buy it if one column had all the nice pure natured things and the other column listed deviant evil natured things. it would be interesting and humourous.

eh, good idea, but some of the ideas you have are contradictory (ie universality & diversity or regional iniatives). a lot of things are also redudant (ie movement and movement partners). and others just make no sense, (ie biomedical services... you can have medical services, but there really aren't any biomedical services). the concepts listed are also all over the board with some major ideas left out.



i think as presented, it does come off a bit preachy because of the reasons described above. i think that if you were to shorten and clean it up a bit it would work a lot better. if you were to either focus the ideas on one specific issue or else make it more general i think it would be much more powerful. as it is, it feels like you're trying to potshots at random things.



as for the boxes, i also found it odd they weren't checked. i'm not too keen on the personalization/marker idea. maybe that's a big thing where you are, but it's certainly not where i am. i also don't know how personalized the shirts can really be. in all honesty, wouldn't the people who took the time and effort to buy the shirt 'love' all of those concepts? i mean, who's agaisnt shelter or drinking water? it'd seem the statement would come from what you didn't check, rather than what you did (ie if you didn't check, holocaust victim tracing). i like the boxes, but i think it'd be better to have them checked when printed.

I need to see whats listed on this shirt before I commit to it..



u geta 3

I like the idea alot, the layout needs abit of tackling, like everyone has mentioned. Maybe all the checks below the "I (heart)" ?

i agree with moving it under the heart

What's on the back? I *heart* beer?

too many choices!!

is compassion supposed to be on there? it seems like it should be there in the top three with hope and humanity, but it's not even mentioned.

I don't like civilians or donating tissue.

$5 if you snuck "The Dick" in there.

This is almost as long as the Red Cross blood donation forms. Urg.

I <3 vulnerable people.

I agree with the myriad of comments noting that there are too many options, none of them are checked, they are kind of scatter-brained and redundant, the overall concept is good but this is executed rather badly. Not that the time that it takes is necessarly the defining measure of a design, but when thinking of random things to put after i <3 is the longest part of the effort, something should be different...

I LOVEEEE THIS SO MUCHHHH.

Biggest problem here is that New York sues everyone who copies their tourism logo.

SUCKS

i love it it it it it it it it it it it it it it itit!

MAKE IT NOW