An old virus
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2231 days ago
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Apr 17 '06
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63 comments
Note moyenne :
2.71 from 2,219 votes
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Robsoul on Apr 17 '06 lose the bird and lose the type... otherwise AWESOME!!!!!
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Not sure about the vines, they look kinda 'stuck on'.
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This is similar to gameyy's Once Upon A War (same shot of the tank, same overgrown feelings.)
http://www.threadless.com/submission/59656/Once_upon_a_war In any case, you're either gonna want to change the vines so they fits the vectortrace feel or do the vectors by hand so they match the vines. Also, even vines need to grow from somewhere. |
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bananaphone on Apr 17 '06 wow.
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G-NOVA on Apr 17 '06 Verdana >>> Sorry I had never seen this visual, but it is the first image which came to me to speak about hope
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Has a lot of potential to be really good, I agree with what Verdana said about the vines, making it all fit together would really make me fall in love with this. I do like the text though, it helps drive the point home for those people in the world that can't look at a picture and get a point.
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I definately don't like the text. The message would be much more effective without it. 2 as it is, $5 if you lost the text.
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nice
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I think the message would be lost without the text.
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i think the image of the tank with vines is enough...or more over i think the kids lok a bit weird.
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yah they have hover tanks by then, with lasers
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why does everyone hate text so much? The meaning or concept would be floundering without the text in this case... leave the text as is! great idea like it a lot.
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I love this, its classic and orignial $15. Kind of puts a tear in my eye. I believe the bird can stay.
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jpiatt on Apr 18 '06 WOW!!!
That's a very moving image...and the text HAS to stay, it makes it more powerful. This is just great. 5 |
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Lose the text.
One that has to do with war that I actually like. |
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The green vines show up so nicely against the dark tank. Nice job.
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.moto. on Apr 18 '06 i love the concept, but i don't really like the combination of the filtered tank and the vectorized vines. not to keen on the way the writing looks either. 4
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.moto. on Apr 18 '06 having said that, i don't think the tank would work any other way.
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Drummer Hoff fired it off...
You don't need the kids and text. The image speaks loud and clear. I love it. |
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i like this a lot. it reminds me of banksy and he's the greatest ever.
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I like your visual very much you're the best G-Nova !
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i would wear this even with just the tank. i love ittt. $5
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i like the text
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Fix the vines, with or without text. $
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without text -.-
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really cool looking and all... if it was original.... the one verdana posted is amazing.... so i cant give this on that high of a score
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not liking the "an old virus"
er... a tank is a virus? or war is a virus? er.....still not liking it. try a different word there and YAY |
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superb.
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actually the vines are coming from the tank that's why they look like that.
I like this one better than the othe one i think that the contrast between the tank and the vines is pretty cool and the kids are cute ! |
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G-NOVA on Apr 19 '06 xypherscompany >>>The tank is an image of the war in general. that seems obvious to me...
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no text, please... nice!
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I say, if you lose the text, you have ot lose the kids as well. Otherwise it just wouldn't work. Either way Ilike it a lot.
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I'd be tempted to lose the text, because I think it's clear enough what's happening. I'm undecided on whether this would be better without the kids.
As for the vines, I think they work well - the fact that they have a different texture to the tank makes it look as if they are fresher/newer, which fits with the concept. Overall, $5 though. |
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Sweet....
great message... geet er done.... $5 |
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This is genius.
This is spectacular. |
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lose the kids & text, & you've got a good situation.
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Ray. on Apr 21 '06 the tank and vines alone would be nice.
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i love the dove and everything else execpt the text. dont worry, people will get it without the text. awesome job!
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well I like the text, but I can't imagin some little kid saying that
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I know everyone always says this, but without the text, its amaaaazing.
Id buy it. |
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KEEP THE TEXT.
this is great. |
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oh my god. please keep everything! this has to be one of the best submissions ive seen on this website. PLEASE LET THIS GET PRINTED |
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i thought i left a comment on this before, but as it turns out i didn't
well i absolutely LOVE this. everything about it. themessage the art greatt greattt greatt job |
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Like the concep a lot but there seems to be a disjointedness. I agree with Verdana's comment. In that other design, the composition feels stronger. Greater sense of peace.<br>
Kids seem too much on another plan. Perhaps move them up some, enlarge them just a tad to force more foreground appeal. Ditch the words all together or just "What's that?" and 86 the bird. AND lastly, perhaps a more hopeful color for the shirt. After all this is a promising thing. That's all I got :) |
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I love and hate this, love the images, hate the text.
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Might as well beat a dead horse, but I was thinking... that the kids look like they're thinking. No need for the text. Ha! I said it again. It's pretty obvious what they are likely thinking standing there looking at a vine-covered tank. And kids wouldn't say something profound like that. They'd say, "You think we could get inside it and blow things up?"
Lose the text and you leave room for interpretations...innocence, humor, whatever... But this is really great. I hope you listen to all of us and get this sucka printed! |
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Aww... I'd want to see this as well. I'd wear it on a different coloured shirt (dark green maybe?). $5
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i would buy it on a different colored shirt.
5$ |
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the dove of peace is a bit corny.
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why is everyone such text nazis? yes there are some shirts that should not have text, but i think this one definitely should. then it just looks like two kids looking happily at a tank! this shirt is so awesome |
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drop the text and make it all blend, i'msre that was said 80 times....but i read three and agreed
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my vote is lose the text. awesome, though.
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You don't need the text to get the message across. Usually I don't mind the text, but inthis case it's beating you over the head with the message... so no text.
5$ easily. |
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lose the text!! the design is great but the text is corny.
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i like the text....
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love the shirt. I will definately be buying one when it goes into print. The green on the tank looks great.
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absolutely amazing.
I love the idea & I hope that is what it will be like in the future as well. |
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i like the idea a lot. great work. it probably could work without the text as well
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The text is what really gets the message through here, IMHO
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I am new here...is this getting printed?
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This is fantastic.
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Superb
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so very cool!
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