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Noun: Hope

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My description for hope :

Hope is seeing the beauty of the future
cardcastleruins
cardcastleruins on Apr 17 '06
This is excellent. Looks cool, Great message and concept and its got a puppy. So far my favorite red cross design.
tshirtfanatic
tshirtfanatic on Apr 17 '06
I like it without the dog. It makes it too cutesy. I really like the plant and shadow, though.
triplel
triplel on Apr 17 '06
really good, but lose the puppy
blandford
blandford on Apr 17 '06
yeah- puppy not necessary. otherwise, very nice concept & drawing.
lucy.loo
lucy.loo on Apr 17 '06
I don't like the extremely bright green on the plant. And I agree, the dog isn't really necesarry but I like it anyway coz it's cute
DeadPoetic_Underoath
   DeadPoetic_Underoath on Apr 17 '06
5$
Candiru
Candiru on Apr 17 '06
i tH1/\/k i'/\/\ 1N l0v3 y03SSsSSS11!!!111eleveneleven

n1c3 d3s1g/\/.
landosamorm
landosamorm on Apr 17 '06
the green's pretty extreme
hannabear
hannabear on Apr 17 '06
aww :) I like the bottom placement.

maybe you could have the shadow of the dog as a full grown dog too?
Sodacap_bum
Sodacap_bum on Apr 17 '06
i agree with hannabear



i think the following.



a) lose the puppy

b) keep the puppy and make his shadow big too.

c) make the green a little more subtle and not so GREEN!! because it's an annoying green against the pretty brown and sweet color of the puppy.



otherwise, very very good sub
jojosnow
jojosnow on Apr 17 '06
Nice illustration~

I like the bottom placement too :)
carrifaery
carrifaery on Apr 17 '06
That puppy is Trippin' on Acid!



lose the dog, and it's great, with the dog, i am not diggin it.
Loose_lips_sink_ships_08
Loose_lips_sink_ships_08 on Apr 17 '06
i agree with the sodacap kid.



either lose the puppy or give it a grown up shadow.

also and deeper green..less neon. it clashes in a bad way..



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indicavia
indicavia on Apr 17 '06
Don't like the dog, but that shadow is amazing!
viktor01
viktor01 on Apr 17 '06
Love illustration,

But it doesn't tell me anything about the RED CROSS.

The dog remind me of Arthur's dog..
victimofopportunity
victimofopportunity on Apr 17 '06
no dog please but otherwise i LOVE THIS
No. 45
No. 45 on Apr 17 '06
this is going to be printed, dog or not.
nondescription
nondescription on Apr 17 '06
Lose the dog.
jimmiiko
jimmiiko on Apr 18 '06
perplexing!
fastjumper
   fastjumper on Apr 18 '06
this seems to work really good on the tee, especially the higher placement.and it is a "stand alone" for sure.nice job
cheymann
cheymann on Apr 18 '06
no need for the dog
annamartin
annamartin on Apr 18 '06
love it, but not with the dog.
dpj.deli
dpj.deli on Apr 18 '06
yeah, great except for the dog. 5$ without it.
Atreides
Atreides on Apr 18 '06
if you're going to have the shrub with a cool shadow, then the dog needs one as well. since the dog doesnt have one...it pretty much kills the shirt
aallegre
aallegre on Apr 18 '06
i agree- bigger dog shadow, because then you see the future of all the elements.
smallapple
smallapple on Apr 18 '06
aww, thats the cutest puppy ever

em fu
em fu on Apr 18 '06
True say, as much as I adore pupies (he even reminds me of my doggie!), I'd have to agree with taking him out.



IMO He doesn't add to the overall impact of the message, but is more like a cute distracting afterthought.
Auntie_Lulu
Auntie_Lulu on Apr 18 '06
yeah awesome shirt but could be better without the cute little puppy.. :(
2085
   2085 on Apr 18 '06
If you are going to write about lose the dog (which is not a puppy), or something similar to the line, please



please take a minute or two, and try to imagine the shirt without the dog. Will it truly make it more "awesome" ?



I have put a picture of one without the dog in my profile. If you really care, you can take a look.



Thanx for reading.....
Egirl3538
Egirl3538 on Apr 18 '06
I don't think you need to "lose the dog", but I do agree with what someone said that it would look cool if it had a big Shadow, but that might take away from the meaning and based on what you said it is not even a puppy so, ehh. I def. think this is one of the best yet, it is very stand alone and I would $ dog or no dog!
honeybises
honeybises on Apr 19 '06
No, puppy, don't eat it! Some plants are poisonous for you!
luciasaurus
luciasaurus on Apr 19 '06
i like it with/without the dog.
(Noon-See-Oh)
(Noon-See-Oh) on Apr 19 '06
make the dawg all big in the shadow too
o2be_me
o2be_me on Apr 19 '06
I kind of agree about the dog comment, but if you want to keep it in that's completely fine ^_^. Its your design and it should be that way. But seriously bottom right placement looks pimp
LizzyLovingLife
LizzyLovingLife on Apr 19 '06
this is gorgeous.
prizim
prizim on Apr 19 '06
Cute, I like it very much
maybelost
maybelost on Apr 19 '06
the green of the plant is a little extreme, i think. i really like the idea of the full grown dog shadow behind the puppy. and the bottem placement looks good. nice job.
STUPIDITYTRIES
STUPIDITYTRIES on Apr 19 '06
the dog makes it!!!!!!!!
Arketype
Arketype on Apr 20 '06
The dog unmakes it. :P
Vaden III
Vaden III on Apr 20 '06
puppies make plants grow! the message is overwhelming!
Ava Adore
Ava Adore on Apr 20 '06
cute
.onion
.onion on Apr 20 '06
the style of the dog and the blooming plant is really bad. i love the shadow of the flower, though :] maybe you could add a shadow of a grown dog (what hannabear said), but ONLY if you don't simply take it out, cause i think that puppy is really ugly - -; sorry.



the brown is best, the green is too garish.
2085
   2085 on Apr 20 '06
I dont see any advantages for adding a shadow of a grown dog, becuase it wont add anything to the message...



Beside, it is a full grown dog.
guilhermeev
guilhermeev on Apr 20 '06
the matter with the dog is that its so damn cutie... but it´s an excellent design
BrandonB11
BrandonB11 on Apr 20 '06
Sodacap_bum, at 4:58pm on Apr 17, 2006

i agree with hannabear



i think the following.



a) lose the puppy

b) keep the puppy and make his shadow big too.

c) make the green a little more subtle and not so GREEN!! because it's an annoying green against the pretty brown and sweet color of the puppy.



otherwise, very very good sub



same here but i like the very visable green AWESOME design i htink ill just give it a 5$ in case u never get around to fixing it
biol-nerd
biol-nerd on Apr 21 '06
keep it all! and down the bottom please
corporatemonkey
corporatemonkey on Apr 21 '06
why does the plant grow and not the puppy? though i like bottom placement of the design.
viviris
viviris on Apr 21 '06
the shadow of the dog should be a huge rotweiler taking a warm piss on the plant.



kidding. maybe making the dog's future known as well would be nice.

piss is optional.
senor spicy pants
senor spicy pants on Apr 22 '06


i think i love this!!!

the color of the shirt and placement is great

nice job!
romolusIII
romolusIII on Apr 22 '06
romolusIII
romolusIII on Apr 22 '06
sorry bout that last comment im new 2 this



i like the shirt but i think the dog also needs a cooler shadow
indierockfan
indierockfan on Apr 23 '06
it would be cool without the dog



eh...stupid dog



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2085
   2085 on Apr 23 '06
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repeat:



I have put a picture of one without the dog in my profile. If you really care, you can take a look. It truly does not make it any better than now.



I dont see any advantages for adding a shadow of a grown dog, because it wont add anything to the message. Beside, it is a full grown dog.



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dangerouspenguin
dangerouspenguin on Apr 24 '06
I disagree -- it's way better without the dog.
144 days later
derfreddy
derfreddy on Sep 15 '06
wouldnt a dog hope for a tree.?.

anyway nice shadow
298 days later
jelihi
jelihi on Jul 10 '07
I like it just the way it is. :)
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