Threadless

Undercover Pirate

It's been printed!

Statistiques

Scoring finished:
2230 days ago
Proposé le :
Apr 18 '06
Commentaires :
61 comments
Note moyenne :
3.01 from 2,207 votes
Partager avec des amis
Mes autres propositions

skeletore

About my design

by skeletore   
So many people are pirates incognito.
enozzidra
enozzidra on Apr 20 '06
i like this lots
silverkey
silverkey on Apr 20 '06
I LOVE THIS. $5
RyanCox
RyanCox on Apr 20 '06
damn I did a pirate design, and it is pending right now. It is different then this, but I don't want the pirate thing to become like the quid thing. Good design 4$.
RyanCox
RyanCox on Apr 20 '06
I forgot the S on squid up above, opps.
maryd5690
maryd5690 on Apr 20 '06
omg! $5
tomburns
   tomburns on Apr 20 '06
haha, rockin 5
jpiatt
   jpiatt on Apr 20 '06
so.....undercover pirates don't have lower halves of their bodies?

This looks extremely odd with nothing below the shirt, looks unfinished
skinnybinman
skinnybinman on Apr 20 '06
this is amazing $5
weesa13
weesa13 on Apr 20 '06
What would make this a 5 for me is pants with a dotted peg leg underneath. But I am in LOVE with the idea.
_kapow
_kapow on Apr 20 '06
the sword shouldnt go out so much.
Ellsswhere
   Ellsswhere on Apr 20 '06
what weesa13 said... and maybe alittle of kapow's comment as well, but more so weesa13
cardcastleruins
cardcastleruins on Apr 20 '06
This is really cool. i love the lign drawn style. That always gets me. 5

PuterBoy
PuterBoy on Apr 20 '06
I really want this. 5$
Ryan-The-Lion
Ryan-The-Lion on Apr 20 '06
its good i would love to see legs and maybe an outline of boots on him or something seems unfinished but it gets a 4
chiibeth
chiibeth on Apr 20 '06
OMG, i must have this...

i know so many people on the Geek squad who would love to have this.

me too. 5$
shwinkie123
shwinkie123 on Apr 20 '06
weesa13, at 12:46pm on Apr 20, 2006

What would make this a 5 for me is pants with a dotted peg leg underneath. But I am in LOVE with the idea.



^ agreed!!!
se5k
   se5k on Apr 20 '06
he needs legs and a dotted-line outline pegleg.
skeletore
   skeletore on Apr 20 '06
I felt like I needed to explain why I didn't put in a peg leg; of course I considered it.



The idea is that this is an otherwise totally normal looking person (aside from the fact that I only chose to show the torso). If I were to put in a dotted line peg leg it would have to be taking the place of where this person's actual leg should go. If the dotted lines where taken away it would be some normal looking guy with half a leg which isn't exactly what I wanted. I hope that clears things up even if you still wish a peg leg was there.
Sapphi
Sapphi on Apr 20 '06
but i thought pirate swords/cutlass thingies were usually wider?

jezzam
jezzam on Apr 20 '06
really like it ey... 5 and a buy
.onion
.onion on Apr 21 '06
the idea is great!

however, i think the peg leg should go on! just have a whole leg, but dot the peg leg outline over it. i mean, if you're wearing slacks, you can't tell if there's a peg beneath the fabric or real human flesh :P



yeah, i think you should complete the guy, then making him smaller, add more piratey things (like a hat or earrings), and maybe more color.



again, the idea is great :D
calgamax
calgamax on Apr 21 '06
i'll buy it please 5$$$$
se5k
   se5k on Apr 21 '06
you make a good point skeletore ... maybe if the guys leg was bent, like walking/running, this would allow you the clearance to have both the peg and the leg in the same scene ...



also, it just looked kinda funny to me ... i think i figured out why #1. it looks like he'd have to draw it with his left hand, but theres nothing wrong with that. and #2 the tie really stands out, becuase its just straight lines, whereas the rest of the entire thing is curvy. maybe if the tie was not black.



but, all minor points and it still gets $$ from me, as i'd buy one for my girlfriend AND me. keep on rockin. was i helpfull or just a pain?

annamartin
annamartin on Apr 21 '06
I love the idea, but I would like to see pants (maybe outlined pirate pants over business pants?) Also, not loving the khaki, but the design is awesome. I would totally but this (and you should do a ninja one too.)
hans1247
hans1247 on Apr 21 '06
Arrrrrr.
skeletore
   skeletore on Apr 21 '06
No, se5k you're not a pain, I really want honest comments here. Though I don't exactly understand what you mean in your second paragraph. I guess I don't know what you mean by "it looks like he'd have to draw it with his left hand"



As for the tie it's straight because the person is leaning forward and the tie is hanging straight down like it would in reality. I suppose the illustration flaw might be that it's not totally obvious that that's what's going on.



I don't want my explainations to come across as a defensive attempt to dodge critism or devalue other peoples impressions of the design. I really like the total honesty and opinions of everyone; that's how you grow.



Thanks
punkjr
punkjr on Apr 21 '06
I loooove it. Love it! This totally made my morning. $5
daniellam
daniellam on Apr 21 '06
PLEASE not on khaki.
daniellam
daniellam on Apr 21 '06
$5 though =]
NirveX12
NirveX12 on Apr 21 '06
I'm likin the khaki... $5
moral_degenerate
moral_degenerate on Apr 21 '06
I love pirates...and this design, $5 for sure!
siezexthisday
siezexthisday on Apr 21 '06
i think im the only person thinking this but pirates are so cliche nowdays, a year ago or so this would be cool
4this
4this on Apr 21 '06
This is not a rated "G" shirt... or "PG" this is rated ARRRRGGGGGHHHHHH!
inayellowsub
inayellowsub on Apr 21 '06
YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHH
olie!
   olie! on Apr 22 '06
make the spaces between the dashes a little bigger. . .
Borf JR
Borf JR on Apr 22 '06
I love. I love. I love. Pleaase they need to make this. Oh god!
d3d
   d3d on Apr 22 '06
heh. i'm sick of pirate designs but this isn't a pirate design. i love the shushing guy. great job.
I_heart_ducks
I_heart_ducks on Apr 22 '06
reminds me ot Matsuda from Death Note... hmm...



heheh, great shirt! 5$
hunger_thirst
hunger_thirst on Apr 22 '06
I'm a pirate meself, yaargh
Vardaman
Vardaman on Apr 22 '06
THIS ROCKS......5555555555555555555555555555555555555555
passing4sane
passing4sane on Apr 23 '06
no need for a lower half on the guy, just do something with the sword so it's not so... floaty. It kinda looks like it's just hanging out over there
¡ Squirrel Lover !
¡ Squirrel Lover ! on Apr 23 '06
love

$5
uber bad juju
uber bad juju on Apr 23 '06
I love this shirt.
mvmv03
mvmv03 on Apr 24 '06
i really like this shirt but i think it would lookbetter on a different color backdrop
se5k
   se5k on Apr 24 '06
what i meant by "it looks like he'd have to draw it with his left hand" was that he would have to unsheath and brandish his sword with his left hand.



don't worry about backing your work up, its good.
brakemyheart_13
brakemyheart_13 on Apr 24 '06
Man that is awesome but do it on an Army Green maybe? $4
tonikin
tonikin on Apr 24 '06
i like.

$5
Green Cellist
Green Cellist on Apr 24 '06
Although there is a lot of pirate going around, I like this one. A lot.
Elitestest
Elitestest on Apr 25 '06
I especially love the hand gestures.
Big Ed
Big Ed on Apr 25 '06
weesa13 said:

"What would make this a 5 for me is pants with a dotted peg leg underneath. "



I IMMEDIATELY thought the same thing. Finish the design. You have room on the shirt.

Larcin
Larcin on Apr 25 '06
I agree with the dotted peg leg, I think that would finish it well. I'd like to see the hair a bit more defined and "modern", and the sleeve cuff/cut thing seems a bit long ?



Other than that, I'd buy it :D
deer road
deer road on Apr 25 '06
That is crazy talk, don't listen to these comments. This shirt rocks as is, DON'T CHANGE A THING. That's why it's so good, it's a guy in a business shirt with an eye patch and a parrot. brilliant. $5
mr.throk
mr.throk on Apr 25 '06
Yaaaahhhaaaarrrrrrr! Me likes it veery much!!!!



I want this shirt!
jillylittle
jillylittle on Apr 25 '06
arggg mate!
Brett F.
Brett F. on Apr 26 '06
i think the name makes the shirt

i like this a lot.



$4
aahwoogah
aahwoogah on Apr 26 '06
if you dont print this imediately im gonna be devestated viva la swashbucklers
ZombieUnicorn
ZombieUnicorn on Apr 26 '06
I love it.

=D
Barcelona
Barcelona on Apr 27 '06
linework is unique

77 days later
Mazy Mallone
Mazy Mallone on Jul 13 '06
Omg! I've never seen this one, but it's soo awesome.



*clapclap* iloveit
209 days later
hellbent
hellbent on Feb 07 '07
Please reprint!
26 days later
brinkofacomplex
brinkofacomplex on Mar 06 '07
this is awesome!

one of a female would be even better.
62 days later
infinsquared
infinsquared on May 07 '07
Heh, this is an awesome shirt. Would very much like to see a reprint.
72 days later
lovelovehippie
lovelovehippie on Jul 18 '07
this is like the most awesome shirt i've seen tday!! please reprint! :) &&i think what would make the shirt even better are some legs or pants or whatevr?? even though you probably got that alot ANYWAY, just saying.
749 days later
p0gmoth0in
p0gmoth0in on Aug 05 '09
Make a ninja one and I will love you forever.
Tu dois être connecté pour laisser un commentaire.